Wednesday, 28 August 2013

Feedback on They Found a Cave given out...plus new display up - August 28th

All students who handed in their film reports received substantial feedback form (pictured below) and a future focus goal. This feedback is available in their portfolio for perusal.  There is a display of the work completed up in the classroom.

Students have been advised about the importance of:

*a thoroughly proof-reading the top copy
*the use of compound sentences instead of a series of simple sentences
*referring to specific examples in the text to support their ideas.


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